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    dots Submission Name: An early sunday morningdots

    Author: Dreamer5009
    ASL Info:    16, Male, USA
    Elite Ratio:    5.02 - 73/53/28
    Words: 135
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
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    dotsAn early sunday morningdots

    On an early Sunday morning
    everything so bleak and boring
    the sun shone lazily on the fields
    while a car at the intersection yields

    The clouds moved across the deep blue sky
    the aroma in the air sweet as pie
    As the leaves are swept away
    I look onward towards a better day

    I just want you to know
    that through the blaze and the snow
    no matter how bleak the day
    we'll find a way
    for the next early morning
    not to be so boring

    The air will be full of life
    there will be no grief or strife
    the day will spring anew
    even if it was halfway through

    Even at the earliest it gets
    hoping the weather permits
    we'll laugh and mess around
    where fun and happiness abound

    Submitted on 2009-06-10 12:23:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Thank you both for commenting. This poem was originally written for my friend Becca because she was having a bad day.

    | Posted on 2010-01-03 00:00:00 | by Dreamer5009 | [ Reply to This ]
      Yeah, I like your optimistic poems about beauty.
    | Posted on 2010-01-03 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]
      you are pretty amazing poet.its really good.i love its rythme scheme.so all i can say are they are good.and i really enjoy reading them.
    | Posted on 2009-06-10 00:00:00 | by PopRocksRae | [ Reply to This ]

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