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    dots Submission Name: Analogy of Boysdots
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    Author: twistedchick
    ASL Info:    18/girlie/nevada
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 14/56/67
    Words: 282
    Class/Type: Story/Them
    Total Views: 97
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    dotsAnalogy of Boysdots
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    A boy walks into a toy store and finds the best looking toy. He quickly buys it and takes it home, promising all the way there how much fun that little toy is going to have together. Everyday the boy would take his toy out and show it off to all the other boys who were really jealous and tried to take the toy home. But the boy wasnt going to let them, so he kept the toy hidden in his house where only he could see it. After Playing with the toy every single day and never letting it be alone, the boy became bored with it. He started ignoring it and when he would take the toy out he would let his friends play with the toy till he had to return home. After a few weeks of these the toy started to break, pieces of it were falling off, even the other boys no longer wanted to play with it...they left it in the dirt while they played with other toys. Finally the boy didnt want anything to do with the toy anymore, and he threw it into the trash. The toy was no longer any use, all the promises of friendship forever and to take care of it were lies to make the toy stay around. So when he started playing with other toys, this toy felt lonely and betrayed. This toy finally noticed that she was being used...this girl finally was abused enough to total breakdowns...thats why she was thrown away...she had no more of that fun loving carefree nature left in her broken heart. She was just a toy, something to be played with till broken....




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      Nice analogy, I like the similarity, but she is always better than just a toy. And any 'player' isn't worth her time or her respect, so nice piece but my question was it original?
    | Posted on 2009-06-11 00:00:00 | by Doublefeather | [ Reply to This ]


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