Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: My Cloud Ninedots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 157
    Class/Type: Rant/Longing
    Total Views: 593
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1193



    Description:
       Do all the stupid things i did... just made my journey that much more difficult but I suppose its true what I hear God doesn't put you through things you can't handle, he only puts you through the harder times he knows your strong enough to get through.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsMy Cloud Ninedots
    -------------------------------------------


    I long for the sky above me to rain drops of vodka
    To come home to a smorgasbord of drugs

    Heroin
    Powder
    Pills

         The ability to drink myself to oblivion
    Due to all my fail dreams

         To inject that drug into that needy vain of mine
    A way to run from all this pain

    *I and others have caused myself*

    Ultimately to float above the clouds
    *even if its only for a few moments*

    To run...
    HIDE

    Can't you see this is my way of protecting myself?
    Holding it all in got me no where

    The drugs make me happy,
    Even if it is only for a few moments

    It feels like an eternity to me
    A life I have not lived

    But
    a life I
    was meant to live





    Submitted on 2009-06-11 00:57:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      I'm a recovering alcoholic. In my drinking days, I thought I had found a demon who could destroy my other pain and demons. Instead, I later found I had just let another demon in my life to create even greater chaos.

    | Posted on 2009-06-16 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      It's hard for me to relate to this, but I admire your honesty in putting it out there. We all have our crutches, and I suppose it's our duty to walk freely one day.

    But it's good that you realized "The drugs make me happy,
    Even if it is only for a few moments"

    that those are superficial moments, even though they carry the weight of the world. Or rather, remove that weight. It can be so hard to realize that when release can be had.

    So you're stronger, you're clearer, and it seems you can at least see the path even if you've yet to step foot on it. I wish you luck.
    | Posted on 2009-06-16 00:00:00 | by FallenGrace | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    175343

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Skin of Fables written by ShadowParadox
    Pressure written by hybridsongwrite
    One Thing written by Wolfwatching
    Unfortunate Reality written by TeslaKoyal
    In the Mouth of Elysium written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Whiteout written by layDsayD
    What happens written by Wolfwatching
    Pain, an elixir. written by Ramneet
    Date night written by expiring_touch
    102.3 written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Neither Here nor There written by layDsayD
    To Glow written by krs3332003
    Giving written by jjd
    Trails written by Daniel Barlow
    Hopelessly Blind written by ForgottenGraves
    I will call out your name written by RisingSon
    new moon written by CrypticBard
    Push written by JanePlane
    Transparent written by Daniel Barlow
    The Song on Your Guitar written by SavedDragon
    Linger written by saartha
    Summer Nights written by ollie_wicked
    Life changes in a moment written by Ramneet
    untitled written by Chelebel
    Summer written by layDsayD
    Wavelength written by saartha
    Love Can Be... written by HAVENSMITH92
    A Sonnet for Nina written by SavedDragon
    4th of July written by layDsayD
    Incubus written by monad

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry