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    dots Submission Name: I See Prismsdots

    Author: bologna3
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    dotsI See Prismsdots

    I see prisms of light atop their ruthless shurikens
    Whence innocence goes and squats upon
    Fixed frisbees. Who would accuse stars of has-beens,
    Of falling dark light upon their smirchless countenances?

    Who would tag all-powerful colors in the sun, harp
    With the burden of casting shadows? There are pyramids
    Made blunt and soft; there are yet stars chosen for sharp-
    Tonguedness, dispossessed carriers of wanderlust.

    And they are not even the paragons, not even the best
    In the range of forebears. I see prisms of light atop
    Their ruthless shurikens, and an immense tempest
    Where dissidents hitch rides on the tip

    Of a pyramid who has lost all equanimity.
    Who would arraign the prisms for playing communal
    Pony, to the behemoth ruthless shurikens, as stars free
    Themselves of galvanization--and spiral to interpretation--

    The daze of man? The cunning star was first
    Celebrity supplying power, so grant it hegemony
    Over light-bending regurgitation, burst
    The pointed edifice's unbecoming bubble.

    And I see prisms of light atop ruthless inert shurikens,
    And I see P      O      L      ARIS
    Underneath the anointed crown of has-beens,
    As the stars question my observation.

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