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    dots Submission Name: Want (Sex Addict)dots
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    Author: Ghetto_King
    ASL Info:    19 m ft. lauderdale
    Elite Ratio:    0.76 - 4/33/54
    Words: 190
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 684
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1119



    Description:
       just the feeling you get when you have sex on the mind and you crave the high it gives you


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    Everything in me is calling for It my very blood boils at the thought
    In this beautiful world on the highest of highs in the clouds Im lost
    Passion feels my lungs with my lips pleasure is sung
    Want
    Craving this feeling and sexual high, as it creeps up my spine
    Taking control of me as urges flow through my bodyís vines
    Lustful eyes and slight grins admiring this womanís curve
    Turning my verbs into nouns being true to my words
    Making her flesh my canvas
    As I proceed with each stroke to paint my picture
    With a few strokes of my tongue it slow & steadily drifts her
    Feeling every emotion at one moment it seems to hit her
    Want
    This sexual thirst which has mad me bite into its nectar
    Fighting the urges but her will to strong to reject her
    Instead I obey the thirst as my flesh combined with another
    Addicted when we together but apart I suffer
    Affecting females and males both one and the same
    Itís a shame how you canít control yourself with sex on the brain





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