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Want (Sex Addict)

Author: Ghetto_King
ASL Info:    19 m ft. lauderdale
Elite Ratio:    0.76 - 4 /33 /54
Words: 190
Class/Type: Poetry /Passion
Total Views: 787
Average Vote:    5.0000
Bytes: 1127


just the feeling you get when you have sex on the mind and you crave the high it gives you

Want (Sex Addict)

Everything in me is calling for It my very blood boils at the thought
In this beautiful world on the highest of highs in the clouds Im lost
Passion feels my lungs with my lips pleasure is sung
Craving this feeling and sexual high, as it creeps up my spine
Taking control of me as urges flow through my body’s vines
Lustful eyes and slight grins admiring this woman’s curve
Turning my verbs into nouns being true to my words
Making her flesh my canvas
As I proceed with each stroke to paint my picture
With a few strokes of my tongue it slow & steadily drifts her
Feeling every emotion at one moment it seems to hit her
This sexual thirst which has mad me bite into its nectar
Fighting the urges but her will to strong to reject her
Instead I obey the thirst as my flesh combined with another
Addicted when we together but apart I suffer
Affecting females and males both one and the same
It’s a shame how you can’t control yourself with sex on the brain

Submitted on 2009-06-11 19:59:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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