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Gotta have her


Author: Ghetto_King
ASL Info:    19 m ft. lauderdale
Elite Ratio:    0.76 - 4 /33 /54
Words: 184
Class/Type: Poetry /Longing
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Just talking about every mans dream girl or his super woman


Gotta have her



Her very sight is the very conversation on which I thrive
Her skin like the very air that keeps me alive
Her skin tone is the water in which I dive
Her eyes is airplane to me sky
I gotta have her
She is a want and a need all at the same time
That stimulates my body and elevates my mind
My stress reliever that helps move the sun into nights
And revive my dead heart and give it life
I Gotta have her
She is bad but yet she is good
A lady at times but there moments that she is hood
Her very smell fills me up and she constantly gives me food for thought
In her light that she has share with me I find myself loss
At a loss for words turning my tongue on mute
Her smiles everything that is good and true
I gotta have her
She has to be tired from running all these laps in my head
Going from one chapter to the next the title she’s mine is read





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