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    dots Submission Name: Art (Making Love)dots

    Author: Ghetto_King
    ASL Info:    19 m ft. lauderdale
    Elite Ratio:    0.76 - 4/33/54
    Words: 220
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 751
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1343

       Just art of making love with my spin

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    dotsArt (Making Love)dots

    Lying in the bed, eyes connect reading one anotherís face
    Inching closer to each other a range of feelings being shown
    Through there bodies movement at its on steady pace
    Close enough for lips to touch looking through each others eyes
    Pass there color drifting to where there soul lies
    Taking hold of the feeling of love for one another
    Embracing it letting there bodies go
    As the feeling that was inside now physical they let flow
    Taking there time with a every kiss touch and lick
    Not rushing the passion not wanting any spot UN hit
    Parting legs doing a lovers dance
    As the heart beat of each makes the pace for this woman and man
    Long stares into each others eyes and then getting loss in the moment and time
    Feeling every sensation ten times over as if cupid slowed time
    Different positions each special in its on light
    A different face of passion experience and pleasure sublime
    Like to stars or the solar eclipse these lover inline
    Going over every step of four play
    As they get serious with fifth
    Pleasure glands are drunk as they perform scene after scene
    Close to one another like sting after bee
    With each canvas the perfect picture is seen and both parties pleased

    Submitted on 2009-06-11 20:02:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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