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    dots Submission Name: Untileddots

    Author: bleeding_sin
    ASL Info:    16/F/OR
    Elite Ratio:    3.03 - 54/68/57
    Words: 51
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       This is how I feel. A simple little new one for a brand new start.

    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.


    A new time
    A new day
    A new start anyway

    Lets give it ago
    For the last show

    I'm a different me
    With an all new place to be

    My life has changed
    And so has the page

    Goodnight and farwell
    The curtain has now fell

    Submitted on 2009-06-11 21:53:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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