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    dots Submission Name: Untileddots
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    Author: bleeding_sin
    ASL Info:    16/F/OR
    Elite Ratio:    3.03 - 54/68/57
    Words: 51
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 485
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 316



    Description:
       This is how I feel. A simple little new one for a brand new start.


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    dotsUntileddots
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    A new time
    A new day
    A new start anyway

    Lets give it ago
    For the last show

    I'm a different me
    With an all new place to be

    My life has changed
    And so has the page

    Goodnight and farwell
    The curtain has now fell




    Submitted on 2009-06-11 21:53:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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