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    dots Submission Name: Signsdots
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    Author: Kaygrl
    ASL Info:    19/female/Washington
    Elite Ratio:    2.31 - 153/196/213
    Words: 238
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 61
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    dotsSignsdots
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    Read the signs to save yourself.
    When there’s nothing you can find,
    Not a flaw,
    There’s something wrong.
    When he says the things he knows you wanna hear,
    When he sweeps you off your feet with unmatched charm…
    There’s a sign.
    When he paints pictures in your head,
    And doesn’t tell you what he should,
    When he only says he loves you when you’re not happy with him,
    There’s a sign.
    When you feel fine besides sudden tension,
    When he starts acting distant and strange,
    When you used to talk a lot,
    And he starts not responding to you,
    There’s a sign.
    When he changes his mind from love to over in a week,
    When he says he can’t handle not seeing you,
    There’s a sign.
    When he says he doesn’t care about sex,
    When he makes you think he’s perfect,
    There’s a sign.
    When he says he’ll wait for you in every situation,
    Then suddenly leaves.
    That’s a sure sign.

    Funny how I was blind until he broke my heart.
    I can’t believe I trusted him.
    I was putty in his hands,
    Another girl for another game,
    Just another thing to add to the list.
    Just another thing to add to the lies.





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