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Author:	Kaygrl
ASL Info:	19/female/Washington
Elite Ratio:	2.31 - 153/196/213
Words:	256

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
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I Still Love You dots

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Now that I’m good and broken-
Where did your love go?
What I would give to see you look at me like you used to.
What I would give to hear your voice saying the things you used to say.
What I would give to erase the pain.

When will I be able to sleep again?
When will I eat again?
When will I be restored to normality?
When will I stop loving you?

I want more than anything to move on,
And more than anything I wish I hadn’t met you,
Loved and trusted you.
I wish I hadn’t been blinded by my emotions.
I wish you hadn’t hurt me,
Sucked me in then spat me out,
I should have ran when I had the chance.

I just want you to love me more than anything,
I just want you to take your words away that broke my heart.
I want the ugly truth to be a lie,
But the beautiful truth was a lie.
I want back what we used to have,
But I know you’re no good for me.

I miss him in the worst way,
Why can’t you still love me?
If that’s even what you would call it.
But I wouldn’t because love doesn’t fade that fast…
Trust me I would know.
Because as much as I don’t want to,
I still love you.

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You have really expressed yourself here in this piece really well KayGirl... Wow i have to say i do so wish that love would come without risk or burden of heartache when it starts to break down... Love is so important to the soul as to be able to share ones life with another mutually, respectfully and lovingly is just nice and something that i too also yearn. Unfortunately as you well know there are some people out there that aren't meant for us, yet we still persue them with; gusto, knowing full well in our sub-concious that this will lead to no good and that there will be tears, generally our own.

I say this with a deep and heavy heart as it is as if this poem here that you have written seems to cover a recent relationship i have had that was probably a little more one sided from my part i have to admit yet i too was a little crushed in the end. The reason that i am babbling on here is leading to a point and that is;

With every experience that we have along this journey that we call life be it an experience that is great or wether it be one that is heartbreaking; what we recieve from these experiences is the knowlege that allows us to grow as a person into a stronger and more aware and concientious person who is one step closer to that perfect person who is carefree and positive and once you achieve that you will find that the most amazing person will come to you when you are not looking and sweep you off your feet.

KayGirl i so wish for you that this guy will come to you and make himself know so that you will find lifes eternal happiness and true love.

Your Friend Timmy xxx
| Posted on 2009-07-31 00:00:00 | by Timmy S. Edgar | [ Reply to This ]
when i met this guy who i will name.."michah"
it was love at frist sight.i know it doesnt exist but to my 14yr old heart it did."michah" did a great number on my heart however.but i knew he would.he was a "bad boy".my bad boy.but my point is.when we broke up,everywhere i would go i would be reminded of him.where i had my frist kiss.when we fell in love.his favortie song just seemed to be playing on the radio whenever i would listen to it.but thats the power of true love.its going to always be there.im with someone new.he is sweet and yes.."love at frist sight". but not a day goes by when i dont think of "michah".im trying to say its okay for you to love him.i will always love "michah"but i can live my life knowing he did me a favor.you'll met someone eles.your feeling may not go away but you can love again.
rachel:)
| Posted on 2009-06-12 00:00:00 | by PopRocksRae | [ Reply to This ]

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