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    dots Submission Name: The End Up Close...dots
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    Author: WhoKnows
    Elite Ratio:    1.41 - 7/12/12
    Words: 140
    Class/Type: Story/Lostfriend
    Total Views: 68
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1002



    Description:
       This story is fiction but it was heartfelt all the same... I write what comes to my head even if it doesn't make sense, but I hope you enjoy them anyway...


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    dotsThe End Up Close...dots
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    Over and over the words repeat in my mind...

    "You" - "Me" - "Us" - "... Why?"...

    Things I couldn't answer - Still can't answer...

    If I knew this was our last conversation...
    I would have made up answers to these questions...

    -The meeting of innocence- (Our story begins)

    -The love of youthful sinners- (A turn for the
    worse)

    -Bad combinations, Sad expressions upon crying faces- (The ending begins)

    -Rolling 'scrap'; Your '64 Mustang-
    (Background story)

    -Sobbing eyes; Fading eyes- / Final
    -Broken frown; Dull grimace- Moments

    -Heartfelt goodbyes; Last words-
    (The end in sight)

    I cry... You smile... Seeing you end was my end,
    Even if those were your happiest minutes...

    Beginning sadness - Leaving happiness...




    Submitted on 2009-06-12 17:03:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Wow. I'm a little confused but it had a nice "ring" to it. I guess im trying to say it was catchy...
    | Posted on 2009-08-27 00:00:00 | by extrEMO | [ Reply to This ]
      yaya amen sista!! lol love mcrbudd
    | Posted on 2009-07-12 00:00:00 | by ShadowGaze | [ Reply to This ]
      thats a wrap.
    but when you think of love,the end is something we risk.we know its there.we know its going to be coming for us,but we choose to love.thats what makes it so intense.choosing to face it.your story reminded me of putting my heart out.sadness comes with love.but the truth is we choose sadness.
    i loved your story thingy.it reminds me of crying.its good.thats what it should do.random thoughts thrown together can do that.
    so props!
    rachel:)
    | Posted on 2009-06-12 00:00:00 | by PopRocksRae | [ Reply to This ]



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