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    dots Submission Name: I'll be here foreverdots
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    Author: Dreamer5009
    ASL Info:    16, Male, USA
    Elite Ratio:    5.02 - 73/53/28
    Words: 213
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 835
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1337



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    dotsI'll be here foreverdots
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    You may not want me in your life
    I know I've caused my share of strife
    but, whether you like it or not
    even if i get shot
    even if my veins you sever
    baby, I'll be here forever

    I may not be your superman
    I may not do the stuff you think I can
    Angels don't protect me, demons don't possess me
    I ain't no man of God, but baby don't you see?

    That through all the pain,
    through all the strife
    I'll carry on through the rain
    as it falls to become my way of life
    some may think it an impossible endeavor
    but baby, I'll live on forever

    Since the dawn of time
    since the world clocks first chime
    I've been upon this earth
    full of merriment and mirth
    Planning to live and fend
    for myself until the end

    I may have too much time on hand
    but time spent with you ain't too bland
    perhaps through time spent with me
    maybe then I could make you see

    That through all the pain
    through all the strife
    I'll carry on through the rain
    as it falls to become my way of life
    some may think it an impossible endeavor
    but,baby, I'll live on forever




    Submitted on 2009-06-12 19:36:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      it is amazing!i feel so happy and think i should hear you sing it.unless your like me and can't carry a tune!
    rachel:)
    | Posted on 2009-06-12 00:00:00 | by PopRocksRae | [ Reply to This ]


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