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    dots Submission Name: The weed and the rosedots
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    Author: Demoncat
    ASL Info:    14/F/USA
    Elite Ratio:    1.18 - 1/5/11
    Words: 242
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
    Total Views: 785
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1399



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       A rose and a weed, will they ever get along?


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    dotsThe weed and the rosedots
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    Once there lived a patch of weeds.
    The weeds were nice folks, though people didn't like them they always continued to blossum nice yellow flowers.
    There lived one weed that was the smallest of them all, though she was the nicest weed ever she was so small that no one could hear her.
    Next to the weeds lived a single rose.
    The rose was very pretty indeed, but selfish, and ignored the weeds.
    each and everyday the littlest weed would visit the rose.
    The rose ignored him for a while but later on she only pretended to ignore him, no one acually cared enough to talk to her.
    But one day someone steped on the weed.
    The rose grew weary as she saw the weed lifeless.
    The rose wanted to make sure he was okay but cared too much about what the other flowers would think if she talked to the weed.
    The rose started to cry dew drops thinking that the weed was dead "I love you." She said mourning over him.
    Unexpectly the weed started to perk up very slowly, and just smiled.
    The rose was shocked by this so much that she acually smiled back.
    "That was the first thing you ever said to me..." the weed said eagerly smiling big like a little child who discovered something beautiful.
    The weed family welcomed the rose with open arms and the rose was never lonely ever again. The end.




    Submitted on 2009-06-13 10:19:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      sweet short story I loved every bit
    | Posted on 2009-06-15 00:00:00 | by littlepoet | [ Reply to This ]

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