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    dots Submission Name: I fell in love todaydots
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    Author: Demoncat
    ASL Info:    14/F/USA
    Elite Ratio:    1.18 - 1/5/11
    Words: 187
    Class/Type: Poetry/The pain inside
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       I fell in love today, just a simple story of a person who wouldn't speak up.


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    I fell in love one day, just by saying hello, my heart started to thump for once.
    I fell in love one day, for talking more, my heart just won't calm down.
    I fell in love today, I said that I did and learned I was loved back, my heart is beating like a hoard of wild animals.
    I fell in love today, I had to leave and i hoped I would be missed, my heart skiped many beats.
    I fell in love today, everyone forgot I was in love, my love has found a different love but I just smiled and talked to my love's new love, my heart is thumping calmly.
    I fell in love today, my love said hello to me, My heart started to slow donw.
    I fell in love today, My love found someone new, my best friend is know my love's new love, my heart is beating slowly like a baby bird's breath.
    I fell in love today, my love stopped talking to me, and my only friend glares me down to the bone, my heart stopped and I died today.




    Submitted on 2009-06-13 18:48:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      its funny how we meet our friends, the similarities we have in common, but whos to know if it's friend or foe.. the cost can be overwhelming.. nice poem.
    | Posted on 2009-06-14 00:00:00 | by Luvmiannie | [ Reply to This ]

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
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