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    dots Submission Name: Sweet Nothingsdots
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    Author: Luvmiannie
    ASL Info:    30 something
    Elite Ratio:    2.15 - 20/7/14
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsSweet Nothingsdots
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    I remember when sweet nothings
    would melt my hearts defenses
    when the simple gesture of beauty
    would get my attention
    you didn’t have to mean it
    just say the words to me
    and I would believe it
    its validated by a dream
    if only lonely wasn’t my friend
    its sweet smell of bullshit
    wouldn’t smell so good




    Submitted on 2009-06-13 23:11:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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