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    dots Submission Name: Felt Like Writingdots

    Author: red_summer
    Elite Ratio:    3.9 - 31/38/60
    Words: 365
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       Emokids are very interesting to me. I realize I am one. but I'm too damn old to act like I am one. Oh well. You miss the boat you miss the boat right

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    dotsFelt Like Writingdots

    I guess by definition
    I'm an emo kid
    but no amount of slashing of the wrist
    Could reach as deep or bleed as complete as my pen
    So I relinquish the task to its most capable ink
    Sink deep within my sorrows and let my paper drink the refuse
    This art here is much more self mutilating than self abuse
    The tracks that I've slashed across pads is deeper than pain
    and more refreshing than rain
    this thing in my hand
    Is the sharpest razor ever made
    Who knew papermate could create such a tool of self mutilation
    Ripping past flesh into my spirit
    just to express a distress that can never be relinquished
    So I obsess over the mess that is my greatness
    My art
    Is as harmful to me as it is beautiful to read
    Emo poetry from little emo me
    But like every poet I know I'm an oxymoron
    Rules in my mind don't ascribe to the world that you're on
    See when I say I'm an emo kid I don't mean I'm mad emotional or depressed
    I mean that I'm emotionless
    In the world of lyrical prowess you must maintain duress
    But I've relinquished all concept of feeling so that I'm beyond numb inside
    Numb seeks me out to confide
    Using me to describe how he feels inside
    Emo kid inside out
    I'm the least bit concerned about how I feel
    I reveal it so frequently because it means nothing to me
    Say what you want at the end of the day I'm still goin to be me
    and you could never be me
    Like a blind man in a mirror house
    you can't see me
    I came in this world alone and thus shall I leave
    Peace would be if I could be alone that future comes to be
    but as it is I must share breath with inanimate spirits that call themselves humans
    Wondering why I'm so detached from you men
    Emoticons is the only way I can relate to you all
    Meet me on a page
    You can just as easily write what you're about to say
    And I'm out

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