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    dots Submission Name: Just a Treedots

    Author: Luvmiannie
    ASL Info:    30 something
    Elite Ratio:    2.15 - 20/7/14
    Words: 159
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    dotsJust a Treedots

    I try not to be
    Just like that tree
    That held the rope of injustice
    To keep our place in society
    We excuse our notoriety
    Quiet is kept
    Slighted by it
    But Iím only just a tree
    I didnít put you on my branch
    I didnít let you go either
    For itís not my place to take sides
    Your plight is a plight once mine
    Itís easier just to stay unbiased
    And pretend that my moment is all that matters
    But whatís wrong is wrong
    So why is your corner so far
    To share in a battle once won
    Why wonít I embrace you like a brother
    God wants the best for all his children
    I guess its easier being a tree
    A silent conspirator with justifiable reasons
    For itís not my rope and Iím just a tree
    Itís not my fault so find no fault in me
    Iím just a tree, thatís right just a tree.

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      A special piece... written as an observer to life rather than an active player in it.
    I like the way you keep the story all the way through and the thoughts it brings out, its a very interesting piece... I like it. Its good.
    | Posted on 2009-06-15 00:00:00 | by Kwanying | [ Reply to This ]

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