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    dots Submission Name: Only He Can dots
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    Author: MMISS
    Elite Ratio:    2.68 - 503/492/149
    Words: 162
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Depressed
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       to hear this song or watch video, go to YOURHYMN.COM for the song

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    PLEASE VOTE for my song (ONLY HE CAN)in the contest by June 14th midnight at YOURHYMN.COM

    thank you and God bless!
    Mary M.


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    dotsOnly He Can dots
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    I can lend an ear

    And try to understand

    But I can't ease the pain

    Not like Jesus can



    And I can wipe your tears

    And I can hold your hand

    I can calm you fears

    But not like He can


    Only He can heal a heart thats been broken

    Only He can make those tears go away

    Only He can lift you up and place you on a mountain

    Only He can take the pieces and put it all together and heal the pain

    Only He can



    I can grieve for you

    When you have tears to cry

    And I'll morn for you each mornin

    But He'll stay by your side



    He can be that friend

    Who stays through thick and thin

    No matter how it ends

    Yes only Jesus can





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    ||| Comments |||
      This is true. I have friends that do not know him and come to me venting or grieving, I can be a vessel and I can lend love but there is nothing that compares to direct healing and love through receiving it directly from him. Thank you for sharing.
    | Posted on 2015-10-28 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]


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