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    dots Submission Name: Jerarddots
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    Author: ilynate
    ASL Info:    16/F/MA
    Elite Ratio:    0.52 - 0/1/1
    Words: 67
    Class/Type: Poetry/Childrens
    Total Views: 524
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 407



    Description:
       i was feeling childish.........


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    dotsJerarddots
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    In a hole
    Inside a tree
    Lives a bug that no one can see
    His name is unknown
    But his shape is eccentric
    He turns on and off
    Just like a lamp switch
    He hobbles and wobbles wherever he goes
    What he does with his life
    Nobody knows
    But as you can see
    He means something to me
    My Jerard, sweet Jerard
    Come back to our tree




    Submitted on 2009-06-15 07:48:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      A very different kind of piece of the ones I have seen... sweet and subtle, reminded me of the world kind of seen from a childs innocent perspective.
    The flow of the words is written well...good flow all the way through.

    | Posted on 2009-06-15 00:00:00 | by Kwanying | [ Reply to This ]


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