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    dots Submission Name: I Am A LOVESONGdots

    Author: Soldier O_Tears
    ASL Info:    18/M/INDONESIA
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 41/129/120
    Words: 140
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 587
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 805


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    dotsI Am A LOVESONGdots

    I am a stack of rose
    I am a drop of raincloud
    I am an apple hanging before your eyes

    i am a love song
    i am a love song
    dictated into your feeling though your hearing

    i am a mountain of money
    i am an abundant compassion
    i am whatever you've ever desired

    i am a love song
    i am a love song
    a telltale foretold to your sleep

    i am french kiss
    i am a one night stand
    i am a left lit streetlamp forever alone
    i am a secluded road
    a one way to your fountain of infatuation

    i am a love song
    i am a love song
    brainwashed into your mind voluntarily

    i am a love song
    i am a love song
    i am a love song

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