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    dots Submission Name: Mirror, Mirrordots
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    Author: Dreamer5009
    ASL Info:    16, Male, USA
    Elite Ratio:    5.21 - 64/43/24
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 106
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    dotsMirror, Mirrordots
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    We look in the mirror
    and see our own reflection
    but as, at it, we leer
    we're looking in the wrong direction

    for it's not what's on the outside
    but what's underneath
    It's whats on the inside
    not the skin, but what's beneath

    when we don't like what we see
    lets try not to care
    for it's all about the personality
    not about the hair

    so when you meet someone here
    It doesn't matter how you look
    It doesn't matter what's in the mirror
    just let them read you like a book




    Submitted on 2009-06-15 20:16:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      amazing.
    like i knew you would write!
    sometimes..people underestimate other people.
    but when you look in the mirror,you can't escape
    anything!its there telling you the truth.
    when i look in the mirror,i see how strong i can be! and i hope when you look you see the same thing.
    this whole thing has taught me ,inner strengh no matter how you push it down,it comes out when you need it.thank you for helping me with finding it again.
    rachel:)
    | Posted on 2009-06-15 00:00:00 | by PopRocksRae | [ Reply to This ]


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