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Submission Name: Why dots

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Author:	Dreamer5009
ASL Info:	16, Male, USA
Elite Ratio:	5.02 - 73/53/28
Words:	72

Class/Type:	Poetry/Serious
Total Views:	925
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	501

Description:

Why

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The ultimate question
to which none know the reply
in books, there's no mention
to the answer of "why"

If one does know the answer
they must be smart
but the madness spreads like cancer
in the search for the questions heart

The quest for knowledge is great
you've decided you must at least try
and then, you feel your madness abate
for you've just found the answer to "why"

Submitted on 2009-06-15 20:19:16 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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Very nice poem man, I was in a weird life questioning mood and then i read this and now i feel a little better. Very well written too. Good job.
| Posted on 2009-06-21 00:00:00 | by JakeHawk | [ Reply to This ]
why did i trust someone eles?
why didn't i listen to my heart?

but better yet..
why am i feeling happy when i should be crying?

rachel:)
| Posted on 2009-06-15 00:00:00 | by PopRocksRae | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.