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    dots Submission Name: Whydots
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    Author: Dreamer5009
    ASL Info:    16, Male, USA
    Elite Ratio:    5.02 - 73/53/28
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsWhydots
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    The ultimate question
    to which none know the reply
    in books, there's no mention
    to the answer of "why"

    If one does know the answer
    they must be smart
    but the madness spreads like cancer
    in the search for the questions heart

    The quest for knowledge is great
    you've decided you must at least try
    and then, you feel your madness abate
    for you've just found the answer to "why"




    Submitted on 2009-06-15 20:19:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very nice poem man, I was in a weird life questioning mood and then i read this and now i feel a little better. Very well written too. Good job.
    | Posted on 2009-06-21 00:00:00 | by JakeHawk | [ Reply to This ]
      why did i trust someone eles?
    why didn't i listen to my heart?

    but better yet..
    why am i feeling happy when i should be crying?

    rachel:)
    | Posted on 2009-06-15 00:00:00 | by PopRocksRae | [ Reply to This ]


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