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Submission Name: Everyone looked dots

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Author:	Dreamer5009
ASL Info:	16, Male, USA
Elite Ratio:	5.02 - 73/53/28
Words:	78

Class/Type:	Poetry/Comedy
Total Views:	775
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	545

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Everyone looked dots

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Everyone looked
and saw something different
the place was booked
and yet eyes, on me, descent

I tried not to notice
though I couldn't help but stare
I know they couldn't know this
but I wasn't so rare

from them I was different
a weirdo, a freak
yet, by myself, I was confident
for my friends came next week

Everyone looked
and saw everything different
the place was booked
and yet eyes, on us, descent

Submitted on 2009-06-15 20:29:12 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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Never change who you are. I say classify yourself not different but UNIQUE! Everyone has a unique flair about them. Don't worry what others think or say about you. You are you and no one else can be you! Ain't that UNIQUE......lol!
| Posted on 2009-06-15 00:00:00 | by msmystic | [ Reply to This ]
you connected.with the awarkdness we all feel.
im confident.but im still a geek.
but i embrace it!
haters will hate.and lovers will love. but people who look past apperances will accept you for you!
rachel:)
| Posted on 2009-06-15 00:00:00 | by PopRocksRae | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.