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    dots Submission Name: Everyone lookeddots
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    Author: Dreamer5009
    ASL Info:    16, Male, USA
    Elite Ratio:    5.02 - 73/53/28
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
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    dotsEveryone lookeddots
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    Everyone looked
    and saw something different
    the place was booked
    and yet eyes, on me, descent

    I tried not to notice
    though I couldn't help but stare
    I know they couldn't know this
    but I wasn't so rare

    from them I was different
    a weirdo, a freak
    yet, by myself, I was confident
    for my friends came next week

    Everyone looked
    and saw everything different
    the place was booked
    and yet eyes, on us, descent




    Submitted on 2009-06-15 20:29:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Never change who you are. I say classify yourself not different but UNIQUE! Everyone has a unique flair about them. Don't worry what others think or say about you. You are you and no one else can be you! Ain't that UNIQUE......lol!
    | Posted on 2009-06-15 00:00:00 | by msmystic | [ Reply to This ]
      you connected.with the awarkdness we all feel.
    im confident.but im still a geek.
    but i embrace it!
    haters will hate.and lovers will love. but people who look past apperances will accept you for you!
    rachel:)
    | Posted on 2009-06-15 00:00:00 | by PopRocksRae | [ Reply to This ]


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