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I Love you


Author: CameraViolence
ASL Info:    16/f/Alabama
Elite Ratio:    1.06 - 3 /6 /33
Words: 324
Class/Type: Lyrics /Love
Total Views: 1095
Average Vote:    4.0000
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I Love you



What do you want?
I can see it in your eyes.
Why do you keep leading me on?

Why do you care?
No matter what you're always there,
Leading me on, you're keeping me strong and I know...

There's no way I can ever let you go.
So don't walk away,
There are no words that can say

What you mean to me.
You make me smile,
We'll always be, how can't you see

That I love you.

Why do birds fly?
Stupidest question.
But only as foolish as questioning you and I.

When will they learn?
That love is forever.
No matter what, never say never.

There's no way I can ever let you go.
So don't walk away,
There are no words that can say
What you mean to me.
You make me smile,
We'll always be, how can't you see

That I love you.

Why does the world
Always want to bring us down?
It's all I can do to keep my feet on the ground.

Are we even friends?
The questions never end.
You gave me a hug, but is that enough?

There's no way I can ever let you go.
So don't walk away,
There are no words that can say

What you mean to me.
You make me smile,
We'll always be, how can't you see

That I love you.

It's summer now,
And I miss you more than ever.
I wish you had at least given me your number.

I looked it up
In all the Yellow Pages
And I can't believe that I won't see you for ages.

There's no way I can ever let you go.
So don't walk away,
There are no words that can say

What you mean to me.
You make me smile,
We'll always be, how can't you see

That I lo-o-love you.




Submitted on 2009-06-15 21:47:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  love this it is very well wrote
if you have the time plz comment my poems
thank you
| Posted on 2009-06-16 00:00:00 | by sparkleshine | [ Reply to This ]


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