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    dots Submission Name: questions that piss her offdots
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    Author: joezwells
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       trying to answer these questions for my broken hearted sister. the answer at the end pissed her off! i didnt know what else to tell her


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    dotsquestions that piss her offdots
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    when you hurt someone so bad
    how do you mend the damage caused?
    when you hide agendas
    and they come to surface
    how do you mend the bad intentions?

    how do you let go when you thought you had it all ?
    how do you know that dishonesty will catch you when you fall?

    the major question is...how do you let go of someone you truly love?
    ..........

    time will heal all but effort is key




    Submitted on 2009-06-16 02:24:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I'm not really sure what you are trying to get at and who did you hurt. It sounds like your trying to be specific but at the same time your beating around the bush. I am confused.
    | Posted on 2009-07-11 00:00:00 | by captureyourself | [ Reply to This ]
      I absolutely love this. For many reasons, one it's from real life experiance, two it's short and to the point, and three it holds a very good point. I too am learning to put the effort into moving on. This was very inspirational for me. Great work!
    | Posted on 2009-06-18 00:00:00 | by DearlyDeparted | [ Reply to This ]


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