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    dots Submission Name: This Worlddots
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    Author: BlazeFlamme
    ASL Info:    22/m/TX
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 23/160/138
    Words: 133
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsThis Worlddots
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    I will escape from this world
    It's not mine anymore
    There's not enough left here
    To keep me waiting for

    I've heard you shouldn't run
    You're problems you can't evade
    But my running will lead me somewhere
    My mind has already been made

    If you see her you should not shun her
    Wish her well if you wish a thing
    Just because this is no longer my world
    The world here is not to blame

    And for those of you who will grieve
    Don't worry yourself; it's not your fault
    This world's one was already chosen
    So you had lost before it could start

    This may be my only chance
    But it's too late to turn back now
    I will miss this world's treasures
    We might meet again somehow




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