Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • ES Magazine
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • Video Tutorials
  • RolePlay
  • 90% off Amazon
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Love Interestdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: BlueTorcher
    Elite Ratio:    5.82 - 73/57/63
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 51
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 587



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsLove Interestdots
    -------------------------------------------


    As I close my eyes at times like this
    I wonder deep down what really is
    Why do you continue to hold me close
    Why do your lips intoxicate me so

    Buy then I think of your loving eyes
    And how so easily I am hypnotized
    The things I love about you make it seem so easy
    The things I do

    Coming close to the edge but never falling
    Your burning love holds me in a warm embrace
    Wanting to go further
    My lover I love you and never forget
    That you are my forever burning love intrest...




    Submitted on 2009-06-16 09:47:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      You are so good at writing about love! Seriously good! The second stanza has to be my favourite, because at the moment I think I can relate to that.
    I love the emotion you portray in your pieces.
    keep writing, you have a natural talent. That's pretty rare these days, so rejoice in your gift.
    | Posted on 2009-06-18 00:00:00 | by Iffy | [ Reply to This ]



    Full Anime Episodes Streaming Free
    5 million youtube videos all rated over 4.7 stars with 40+ ratings

    [ Copy this | Start New | Full Size ]

    Google
     

    [ Chrispian ] [ Write Forum ]
    [ Friends ] [ SNESroms ] .
    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry
    This user has been inactive for more than 5 days.