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    dots Submission Name: Needingdots
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    Author: BlueTorcher
    Elite Ratio:    5.82 - 73/57/63
    Words: 114
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 62
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 743



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    dotsNeedingdots
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    Slowly slowly I'm beginnig to burn
    As my lips touch yours
    Begging for your skin, your touch
    Grasping at your enclosed body
    Why do you wear so much?

    Leaning forward towards your hands
    Inserting my tongue, starting our dance
    Slowly;fast were bursting through
    As my sight of vision only takes in you

    Shirts,pants,and jelewery gallore
    Simply getting sick at the thought of more
    Hands pulling and eyes searching as we move further on
    Enjoying our erotic dance
    I'm loving the thought of staying in your hands

    Night is over and day has come
    And you finally see what I dreamWhen you are my only need




    Submitted on 2009-06-16 09:49:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      great chicec of words for description .. if u get the time plz comment my poems
    | Posted on 2009-06-17 00:00:00 | by sparkleshine | [ Reply to This ]



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