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    dots Submission Name: Love Again... Right? dots
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    Author: Kaygrl
    ASL Info:    19/female/Washington
    Elite Ratio:    2.31 - 153/196/213
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 55
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 494



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    dotsLove Again... Right? dots
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    If someone loved you once,
    They can love you again, right?
    If they let something totally horrible,
    And the situation around them affect them,
    Once the situation is resolved it can go back, right?
    They can look at you with that look,
    They can let the feeling of love,
    Let the passion flow freely again,
    Because once there is the freedom to do so,
    And nothing to hold it back,
    They can love you again… right?




    Submitted on 2009-06-16 13:47:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      if only this were true. :[ i like the way this is written, and it feels like it came just right out of my own thoughts.

    --ErinnMari
    | Posted on 2009-06-23 00:00:00 | by ErinnMari | [ Reply to This ]


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