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Overcoming Obstacles

Author: BerthaButt711
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Words: 86
Class/Type: Poetry /Longing
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This is another heart-wrenching poem that propels one to consider their obstacles in life and how they view the obstacles of others.

Overcoming Obstacles

Not ordinary in the lives of some.
But for others, they are prominent.
They are boulders in the river and
Fallen branches on a dirt path in the woods.
They are rips and highlights burrowing in the pages of used books.
They come in all forms.
For me,
My obstacle lies in my Great Despair.
And your obstacle lies in what keeps you from
what is different.
are not easy to overcome.

Submitted on 2009-06-16 15:57:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  It's pretty good, I enjoyed this a lot more then the other one. Keep up the good writing,I liked how unique this peice is it's serious without being annoyingly suicidal.
| Posted on 2009-06-17 00:00:00 | by Princess of Ra | [ Reply to This ]

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