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    dots Submission Name: A Question Of Reflectiondots
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    Author: eggshells
    ASL Info:    23/M/WA
    Elite Ratio:    3.19 - 29/75/68
    Words: 51
    Class/Type: Riddle/Mirror or Mask
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       Not really a riddle... just answer if you want...!?!?!?


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    dotsA Question Of Reflectiondots
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    Imagine if you couldn't see yourself.
    A world without mirrors,
    Without reflections.
    The ability to compare yourself to others, now nonexistent.
    Others unable to know of their looks.
    Would haughtiness diminish?
    Or would the world as we know it be turned upside down?

    How would you feel?




    Submitted on 2009-06-17 00:40:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hmmm i'll have to get back to you on this one. but an interesting question nontheless. hmm. that's a good premise for a piece.
    | Posted on 2009-06-17 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]


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