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    dots Submission Name: Song Titlesdots
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    Author: Frank Maguire
    ASL Info:    52 / UK
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 1727/1248/246
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 69
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 597



    Description:
       Each line of this poem, is a song in it's own right.


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    dotsSong Titlesdots
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    I love you more
    Sweet Caroline
    When all is said and done
    Stand by me
    For all we know
    Together we are one

    Be my love
    Forever more
    In a simple rhyme
    Hold me
    Take me in your arms
    Until the end of time

    You raise me up
    So far away
    Somewhere beyond the sea
    All night long
    To be with you
    You are my destiny

    Don’t ever change
    Eight days a week
    Until the day I die
    I want to tell you
    I love you
    Now that I can fly




    Submitted on 2009-06-17 16:41:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This had to have been very difficult, and I don't see how you pulled it off! But, it's very artistic, and quite a novelty. How you even managed to make titles into a lucid poem story is amazing!

    I gotta say, tho, that I'm frankly "spoiled" by your outstanding poetic creations, so I like those the best!
    | Posted on 2009-06-21 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      Thats so neat !! I love the way you made this poem - I'd always wanted to make one like this, with just song titles but could never get it to work. I love it !! Well done ^-^

    ~Lou~

    ps. sorry this comment is so lame, Its 11 past midnight and I've gotten past tired to the "stupid, clumsy and hyperactive" state hehe. ciao x
    | Posted on 2009-06-17 00:00:00 | by elseibi | [ Reply to This ]


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