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    Author: Passionbyapathy
    ASL Info:    18/M/Ohio State
    Elite Ratio:    6.06 - 174/189/127
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 61
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 833



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    I wish, I wish...
    no resolution;
    left you hanging there
    tick, tick...
    spinning right around
    a point in time
    the center spoke
    to guide the creeping
    pendulum
    striking a match
    a pitch
    a hollow tone
    echoes low:
    infinity
    while everything that ever was
    is no more again together


    We splash about in the ocean of eternity
    little ripples, churning waters
    Indifferent
    mountains rise above
    soaring high to see the nothingness
    of everything
    conscious stone
    crumbles back into the depths
    to sleep and Nonthinking
    all flickers die
    beneath the cowl of time
    everything consumed
    by infinity

    the universe is hollow




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