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Milkyway


Author: MysterydarkPoet
ASL Info:    20/f/Aust
Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 157 /295 /173
Words: 163
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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Milkyway



An unmeasurable distance,
Makes for unmeasurable pain.
And I would crawl,
Every inch of any distance,
Just to have me call your name,
And hear a reply.

but, where are you now?
i feel god's testing my dedication
by facing me with this tribulation.
because, you my love,
i can not find.

but I've been thinking and thinking,
as i watched the shooting stars,
race across the late night sky
that if the milky way is all that it seems,
stars strewn with sparkles in between-
Then maybe that's where angels lie,
In the beautiful array of light that decorates the sky

So I decided in that moment,
while staring into the beautiful display of the afterlife,
that if i had to walk there on my own two feet,
i don't think I'd care,
cause while I'm here and your there,
it doesn't seem to far at all.
But-
i don't think such a place,
would welcome me at all.




Submitted on 2009-06-18 08:03:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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