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    dots Submission Name: ...since you asked...dots

    Author: rws
    ASL Info:    58/m/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 2779/1297/258
    Words: 29
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
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       ~We demand justice and God grants mercy~

    Imagine that...

    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dots...since you asked...dots

    …since you asked…


    What I broke
    Someone else repaired

    Some call it God
    Some call it
    Something else

    It’s not for me
    To say

    Submitted on 2009-06-18 15:20:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is an interesting work. So short, yet it is embeded with a deep meaning. I like the idea that you used and how you described mercy. When you broke it and someone repaired it. That is mercy indeed.

    Keep it up and see you around.

    - David -
    | Posted on 2009-07-02 00:00:00 | by garnet4david | [ Reply to This ]
      it was very right to the point...i really enjoyed it...most short poems don't turn out but nice work on this...i agree how you said it wasn't for you to say...but who's is it to say?.....think about it....anyways it was a good write to me

    keep writing~taintedsmiles
    | Posted on 2009-06-19 00:00:00 | by taintedsmiles | [ Reply to This ]
      justice is essential to God's perfections, but
    mercy is paramount!
    all of us would be consumed if it were
    not for the Lord's mercies...they are new each morning!

    i really liked this a lot, Bill.
    now, you must excuse this pathetic comment,
    seeing this is the only one ive given in years!
    i will think about it some more and maybe comment further on it later.

    its nice to be back, sir...
    | Posted on 2009-06-18 00:00:00 | by rev.jpfadeproof | [ Reply to This ]

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