Above My Head by Crestfallenman

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Submission Name: Above My Head dots

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Author:	Crestfallenman
ASL Info:	21/M/CA
Elite Ratio:	4.72 - 603/832/350
Words:	55

Class/Type:	Poetry/Depressed
Total Views:	75
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	336

Description:
Carpe Diem...

Life will not always be this way.

Above My Head dots

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See for you have seethed the soul,
The hurt, where desire lies at peace.

If one can see the neglect,
The other could see the sorrow.

Would the sun settle?
A new day arise?

Or would the hurt continue in the tomorrows?

After the rest I want to have so well.

Submitted on 2009-06-19 19:32:29 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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truly interesting.

I picture a desire for an end, a rest here. short and to the point. i like the title of this poem, it counter-reacts to the body of the poem.

| Posted on 2009-06-25 00:00:00 | by dannyshyboy | [ Reply to This ]

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