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    dots Submission Name: Lightdots
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    Author: WhoKnows
    Elite Ratio:    1.41 - 7/12/12
    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 68
    Average Vote:    2.0000
    Bytes: 401



    Description:
       Ya you probably get that this is about more than one thing... Ya...


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    dotsLightdots
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    Light...
    Too bright - Happy...
    I'm not happy, Light shouldn't be in my face...
    I don't deserve light...
    Or happiness...
    Who am I to say I do?
    Who am I anyway?
    Who are you?
    We are no ones...
    People to be avoided at all costs...
    How far are you willing to go?
    I'll go all the way - In more ways than one...




    Submitted on 2009-06-20 00:27:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      So you go all the way huh?
    | Posted on 2009-06-21 00:00:00 | by Cathartus | [ Reply to This ]
      I agree with the above comment!
    | Posted on 2009-06-20 00:00:00 | by xxseluciousxx | [ Reply to This ]
      The first couple of lines confused me after reading the rest. The emotion (or at least the one portrayed) is quite evident, but this seems like it could've been filled in with more detail.
    The last two lines confuse me as well.
    | Posted on 2009-06-20 00:00:00 | by harrieart | [ Reply to This ]



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