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    Author: Yenrx
    ASL Info:    17/Male/WA
    Elite Ratio:    2.59 - 2/2/3
    Words: 302
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 56
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    Description:
       As a final for my English class, we where asked to make a project on the book we just finished (Night). I worte this poem. I had a heard time making this poem because I could not comperend the Holicaust. So insted of using words, I used my emotions. I just put two words what I felt after reading the book. I have only read it twice, and both times it is overwhelming for me to read it because I am reading my own emotions out loud, and it's heard. I hope you enjoy it and remember all of the Holocaust victims, alive or dead, that I dedicate this poem to.
    -Yenrx


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    I walk though the valley of the dead.
    Looking alone at old friends and family, their lights extinguished like candles.
    No tomb made for them to sleep.
    No Payers said for the dead.
    All that greets the dead is the silence in the night.

    Fires lick at me from afar.
    They call my name, telling me “Come, warm yourself in my light.”
    But it is a false light.
    A light that burns only for Demons pleasure in the silence.

    Ghosts haunt me in the night.
    Ever crying my name.
    Calling, “Come, rest your head for but a moment.”
    But it is a false sleep.
    For all that awaits me is the eternal sleep of death in the silence.

    I hear them coming!
    Red flags just out of reach of my hand.
    Calling, “Look! I come to save you in your pain.”
    But it is a false hope.
    As they get closer, I fall farther away in the dark silence.

    I listen to the payers of many.
    They cry, “Eli Eli, Lema Sabachthani?”
    They call, “My God My God, why have you forsaken me?
    All in vain.
    For the Demons have thrown H
    im in the void, extinguishing His loving voice in the silence.

    I see them, gate keepers.
    Guarding the gate from Hell itself.
    We beg them; “Let us free, let us live!”
    All for naught.
    For as the candle is snuffed out, so to is our plea in the ears of the Demons. As if they only listen for the silence.

    Dawn rises in the east
    I see them coming, like dust in the wind
    They come for Us at last!
    This time it is real, it is not just a dream
    I weep, wiping the silence with my tears of joy.
    -Yenrx




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