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    dots Submission Name: The Quiet and The Noisedots
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    Author: harrieart
    ASL Info:    21 / Male / Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    3.75 - 11/5/13
    Words: 165
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 48
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    Description:
       written Friday, October 6, 2006


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    dotsThe Quiet and The Noisedots
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    Oh, God!
    I've lost my sight for words
    I've nothing left to yearn for
    While breath is stolen from my chest
    I write all that I want heard.
    "There's no silence," I protest.
    I can yell out all
    And scream my name
    With all parts of me spent.

    None know the freedom of my yell.
    None stop to question, but I'd tell
    An answer: truth in every word
    What kind of man is in my shell.
    Yes, I'll admit that I'm a recluse
    And am quite sure that I'm about two
    Steps ahead of the shadow cast upon me
    From a less troubled impression of me.

    Sat in attention and stood in line
    I'm not feigning sick [this is for rhyme]
    I wish more clever would surely come
    The wit, in speak, is hardly done.
    Pronunciation is my ring
    And punctuation are my keys
    For written words too silly to speak.
    So humbly now, I'll ask of you to read.




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      This poem is pure genius. A classic. I love it. I haven't lain eyes on something so....enchanting in a long time! Your "quiet noise" is surely heard. Even as I read this poem over and over, I feel compelled to pen my own legacy. Your poem has filled me with motivation. :)
    | Posted on 2009-06-22 00:00:00 | by LovelyGoddess | [ Reply to This ]



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