Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: my caring carebear.dots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: PopRocksRae
    ASL Info:    21/ F/ Heaven
    Elite Ratio:    2.49 - 232/369/355
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
    Total Views: 833
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 899



    Description:
       to my sissy carebear!


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsmy caring carebear.dots
    -------------------------------------------


    i write to you in slience.
    not talkitive as i tend to be.
    you remeber when you got mad?
    you climbed up that stupid tree.

    oh gawd.
    they screamed and yell for you to get down
    i remeber saying."let her be"
    "she gonna come around"

    remeber grandpa.
    you stood for what was right.
    you told him to hit you
    i cried with you that night.

    and when we decided to make our closet
    a walk-in one with flashlights?
    we sat in there forever talking.
    you always made things right.

    now you getting older
    with your baby on its way
    i miss the old times
    i miss the good old days.

    i will never forget us
    no matter where
    you are always my sister and best friend
    my caring carebear






    Submitted on 2009-06-20 11:44:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      OMG you are such a gifted poet, Squeakie.

    beautiful work.
    | Posted on 2009-06-26 00:00:00 | by ruejacobs | [ Reply to This ]
      So sweet!!
    I love it!!
    I remember our stupid walkin closet.
    Remember I moved the toy box so we had a desk? I supose we were just making Due!! >.<
    lol.

    Much Love
    | Posted on 2009-06-20 00:00:00 | by dismal_s child | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    175732

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Night- time written by Daniel Barlow
    // Seasonal Song written by ShadowParadox
    Verse: written by Daniel Barlow
    Ciggarettes written by Poetic_tragedy6
    no sky on the other side written by teika5
    Snippet written by Daniel Barlow
    Johnny's Cock written by endlessgame23
    The Poems Death written by Mepoduo
    The Want written by Daniel Barlow
    Coversheets written by TheStillSilence
    Hyle written by endlessgame23
    Meaningless Meanings written by ForgottenGraves
    To the Artist written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth written by endlessgame23
    Across the bed written by expiring_touch
    The World written by jjd
    A Worsening Effect written by Daniel Barlow
    Starseed written by endlessgame23
    Sword in the Water written by Wolfwatching
    When Sirens Whisper written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Vortex: The Imagination That Is written by KeeperOfLight
    The Human Harmonic written by Daniel Barlow
    going,,,"Skin." written by teika5
    Florida's Autumn Solstice written by closetpoet
    Dream written by closetpoet
    The Curtain Call written by faideddarkness
    Deep written by Janesaddiction
    Adoration written by TheStillSilence
    A bit of Pain written by teika5
    Things They (Don't) Say written by TheStillSilence

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry