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my caring carebear.

Author: PopRocksRae
ASL Info:    21/ F/ Heaven
Elite Ratio:    2.49 - 232 /369 /355
Words: 137
Class/Type: Poetry /Friendship
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to my sissy carebear!

my caring carebear.

i write to you in slience.
not talkitive as i tend to be.
you remeber when you got mad?
you climbed up that stupid tree.

oh gawd.
they screamed and yell for you to get down
i remeber saying."let her be"
"she gonna come around"

remeber grandpa.
you stood for what was right.
you told him to hit you
i cried with you that night.

and when we decided to make our closet
a walk-in one with flashlights?
we sat in there forever talking.
you always made things right.

now you getting older
with your baby on its way
i miss the old times
i miss the good old days.

i will never forget us
no matter where
you are always my sister and best friend
my caring carebear

Submitted on 2009-06-20 11:44:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  OMG you are such a gifted poet, Squeakie.

beautiful work.
| Posted on 2009-06-26 00:00:00 | by ruejacobs | [ Reply to This ]
  So sweet!!
I love it!!
I remember our stupid walkin closet.
Remember I moved the toy box so we had a desk? I supose we were just making Due!! >.<

Much Love
| Posted on 2009-06-20 00:00:00 | by dismal_s child | [ Reply to This ]

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