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    dots Submission Name: my caring carebear.dots
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    Author: PopRocksRae
    ASL Info:    21/ F/ Heaven
    Elite Ratio:    2.49 - 232/369/355
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
    Total Views: 925
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 899



    Description:
       to my sissy carebear!


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    dotsmy caring carebear.dots
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    i write to you in slience.
    not talkitive as i tend to be.
    you remeber when you got mad?
    you climbed up that stupid tree.

    oh gawd.
    they screamed and yell for you to get down
    i remeber saying."let her be"
    "she gonna come around"

    remeber grandpa.
    you stood for what was right.
    you told him to hit you
    i cried with you that night.

    and when we decided to make our closet
    a walk-in one with flashlights?
    we sat in there forever talking.
    you always made things right.

    now you getting older
    with your baby on its way
    i miss the old times
    i miss the good old days.

    i will never forget us
    no matter where
    you are always my sister and best friend
    my caring carebear






    Submitted on 2009-06-20 11:44:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      OMG you are such a gifted poet, Squeakie.

    beautiful work.
    | Posted on 2009-06-26 00:00:00 | by ruejacobs | [ Reply to This ]
      So sweet!!
    I love it!!
    I remember our stupid walkin closet.
    Remember I moved the toy box so we had a desk? I supose we were just making Due!! >.<
    lol.

    Much Love
    | Posted on 2009-06-20 00:00:00 | by dismal_s child | [ Reply to This ]


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