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    dots Submission Name: a happily never afterdots
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    Author: unratedlove
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 4/1/6
    Words: 299
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 58
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1797



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    dotsa happily never afterdots
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    this wasnt no ordinary love story
    there is no happy ending
    nor a beautiful princess
    just an ordinary girl
    waiting for her prince charming to come along
    on a white horse
    and take her away from all the misery she has faced
    this was not one of thoes stories
    no not at all
    wat that girl didnt know was that
    he was no prince at all
    he was an ordinry guy who didnt know any better
    who spent all his time
    holding all his emotions inside
    this girl didnt care
    all she knew was that she loved him for him
    that boy he didnt care he doesnt know
    how much that girl felt for him
    she would spend nights crying
    hating how much she loved him
    she would spend days thinking about him
    but one day she go
    and leave her broken heart with him
    and he will know what has happened
    he will realize a change in her ways
    he wouldnt see her smile no more
    or even her eyes light up with joy
    or even hear her pixie like laugh
    no
    that girl was gone and would never come back
    that boy would finally get the picture
    he would finally know
    that, that girl loves him and he loves her
    he looked for her
    for he knows what he had done
    and he knows what he must do
    he found her
    all alone
    crying
    deppresed
    broken
    she opened her eyes tears ran down her cheek
    she knew it was him
    and ran away because she didnt belive in love no more
    he chased after her
    calling out her name
    but she left for good
    prommising to never come back
    and now hes the one with the broken heart.
    a happily never after...




    Submitted on 2009-06-20 17:51:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I enjoyed reading this. I feel it may be a little off its rythm though. But all in all I liked it alot.
    | Posted on 2009-06-20 00:00:00 | by KindredSpirit | [ Reply to This ]



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