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    dots Submission Name: The Meaning Of Lovedots
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    Author: WhoKnows
    Elite Ratio:    1.41 - 7/12/12
    Words: 135
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 76
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 875



    Description:
       Confusing love... sorta...


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    dotsThe Meaning Of Lovedots
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    Today-
    
I found the meaning of love...
    
Night comes...
    
I lie under silk sheets...
    
Thoughts of love -My love- Fill me...
    
                     >1:06<
    
Sudden emotion- Flooding... Why?
    
Tears of-Sadness,anger,fear?-Cover my face...
    
Blurred vision... Tasting salt... Him...
    
I see his face... So close... Almost reach...
    
Someone screams -I see red...
    
It's me screaming... I cover my mouth...
    
Dreams or halucionations?
    
I look at the clock...
    
                    >1:10<
    
Hours go by in 4 minutes...
    
My eyes burn -I'm still crying- Same position...
    
Halucionations -Must be... How?
    
I don't know... Maybe things will be different...
    

    
Tomorrow-...




    Submitted on 2009-06-20 23:33:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Omg this is awesome Sara lol is this that one time u were tellin me lol its great
    | Posted on 2009-06-30 00:00:00 | by xxLive4lovexx | [ Reply to This ]
      Fact or fiction, emotion is truly present. If fiction, quite superb in recreating such a collection of moments. If not, WOW for your honesty and I sincerely hope you feel better..but am thankful that I got to enjoy this short but delicately pleasant piece. The time is a nice addition and gives a superb scope of reality making it much more real to the reader. Sweetness..
    | Posted on 2009-06-23 00:00:00 | by harrieart | [ Reply to This ]



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