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When you kill a man, a world dies with him. Sunken cities lost in time and memory lie buried with the bones of yesterday. Somewhere past the distance and the dust there lies unseen the crumble of white ruins where life once thrived. The halls are empty now, the floors are bare, so still the feet, the only music that still plays, is the echo of your knock on empty walls, and the whistle of the wind, eating through the emptiness. Oh, the revelry has ceased, the secret knowledge, lost to the rest of known history, a culture has come undone, the spirit of the time if it is anywhere, it carries on somewhere else. And he who lived among the bones, is lost to that world now, a king, abdicated, torn down, unknown. A whole universe has been blotted from the earth, and I wonder, how fickle is the sky of life? Does he still dance there, does he still dream, has the world really vanished, or has it just moved, like Atlantis, hidden beneath a sea, too deep for flesh to reach? Please tell me, when I am strong enough, when I am ready to dive deep, I will find you living still, just a planet out of orbit, still turning, sun still burning, just temporarily out of my reach. |
I liked this :) Im dont usually connect very well with pieces that dont rhyme, but the imagery you have used here actually won me over. "The Whistle of the wind, eating through the emptyness" I can image such a desolate place, that used to thrive, but now left to rot...and the only sound tht covers its walls is that of the wind slowly eroding it away until there is nothing left. I always think when i see other people, going about their daily business...that they are leading their own life, so similar to mine, yet so distant...and how simple single actions can cause a giant rift from the norm. Thanks for restoring my faith in non rhyming poems. The imagery was fab, and well worth the read :) Ryan aka Master Raz | Posted on 2009-06-22 00:00:00 | by master raz | [ Reply to This ] | |