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Indication


Author: Nynaeve
ASL Info:    23, female, Israel
Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 43 /67 /28
Words: 93
Class/Type: Poetry /Dark
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Sometimes it feels this way


Nyn


Indication



The only time I feel,
The only time I know I'm still alive,
Is when I give in,
And stop holding in the tears.

Times change.
The clock ticks and tacks,
Until the needle stops,
It tries to fight,
Until it cracks,
Holding me back.

But I feel lost.
Dead expression,
Empty eyes,
I don't know anymore,
I can't stand it,
I can't let it,
Take hold.

Tears slide down my cheeks,
The one constant thing in my life,
It's when I feel,
I'm not alone,
This isn't real.




Submitted on 2009-06-21 20:25:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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