Catch My Tears by Monsun

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Submission Name: Catch My Tears dots

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Author:	Monsun
ASL Info:	17/Male/Berlin Germany
Elite Ratio:	2.35 - 16/17/13
Words:	119

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
Total Views:	135
Average Vote:	3.0000
Bytes:	721

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Catch My Tears dots

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I dont know how I can say
How much Hurt I have felt
The depression i have felt
How can i say

For all my life i have wanted
someone to hold
someone, to them my heart would be sold
And you are who i wanted

Stand Near
and supress my fears
my obsidan Tears
they fall but you are there, so near
to catch my Tears

Forever i wish to hold you
forever i wish to call you mine
forever i wish to hold you devine
forever i wish kiss you

I will stand near
and supress your fears
your crystaline tears
they fall but i am there, so near
to catch your tears.

Submitted on 2009-06-22 19:56:32 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  is there a german version of this 'site?

it is evident that you have torn your balls off to get this anglicised, apart from the big letter nouns but then, you're brainwashed (or are you?)...

try this:

i dont know how I can say
how much hurt i have felt.

The depression i have felt.
How can i say?

For all my life
i have wanted someone to hold
someone,
to them my heart would be sold
and you are who i wanted

Stand Near
and supress my fears
my obsidan Tears
they fall but you are there, so near
to catch my Tears

Forever i wish to hold you
forever i wish to call you mine
forever i wish to hold you devine
forever i wish kiss you

I will stand near
and supress your fears
your crystaline tears
they fall but i am there, so near
to catch your tears.

you'll see that iran out of steam before i hit the last 2 thirds. but so would you...

lighten up mate.

k?

k
| Posted on 2009-08-03 00:00:00 | by Awkward | [ Reply to This ]
  Thanks love, it was sweet. I'm impressed that you can write this for me. I really wish I could do the same for you. Words are the way to my heart, you have a fourway highway to travel on it seems.
| Posted on 2009-06-23 00:00:00 | by Scaredheart | [ Reply to This ]
  i loved it.
it was so romantic and so good.
so props.
i love it.
do you mind if i add this as my fav?
it just so cute and so well written.
rachel:)
| Posted on 2009-06-23 00:00:00 | by PopRocksRae | [ Reply to This ]

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