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    dots Submission Name: Where is the Peace? dots
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    Author: insanegemini
    ASL Info:    17/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    1.66 - 12/17/34
    Words: 210
    Class/Type: Poetry/Political
    Total Views: 65
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    Bytes: 1451



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    dotsWhere is the Peace? dots
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    They say
    Loyalty
    To the petrified opinion
    Never once freed a human soul
    Or broke a human chain
    And it never will

    Our loyalty
    To our poverty
    Stricken opinions
    Will certainly
    Be the creator
    Of psychological demons and minions

    The human spirit lives free
    Unlike you and me
    We pray for peace
    For a piece
    Of freedom
    Not only in the states of America
    But the whole worlds’ kingdom

    Wars do not help
    They only melt
    The cause and hope
    Cause us
    To mope
    And only
    Scope
    For the answers
    Not put in effort
    To support

    The lack of effort
    Is spreading like cancer
    Dancing like a mad tap dancer
    The corruption
    Is a volcanic eruption
    That prevents
    Serenity
    Loss of identity
    Of
    What is good and right
    What breaks human chains
    Shines light
    On the shattered remains
    Frees souls
    Fills in the dark holes

    Where is the peace
    Where is the missing piece
    To our forsaken tranquility
    That will insure stability
    On all levels
    To avoid the devil’s
    Slander
    And
    Pander
    Where is the piece
    Where is it









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