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    dots Submission Name: exoskeletondots
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    Author: cshv
    ASL Info:    19/m/fl.
    Elite Ratio:    2.73 - 2/5/3
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Personal Quotes/Depressed
    Total Views: 53
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 412



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    dotsexoskeletondots
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    DON'T U SEE THE SEA
    A TUNDRENT BLACKNESS
    HIDDEN WITHIN,THE BLUE ORBS OF BLACK ABIS
    STARING BACK,
    SICK AND SAD
    DING TO LIVE
    LIVING TO die
    HE SCREAMING TO THE SKY
    OW WHAT HAVE i DON TO BE ME
    CANT U SEE WHAT U HAVE DUN TO ME
    AS THE STORM RAGeS WITHIN
    HE LISE DING WITHIN
    OW WHAT HAVE i DUN
    i JUST WANT TO BE ME




    Submitted on 2009-06-23 21:04:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Ok, If all the errors are intentional...then good work.

    Otherwise...As I always tell Rachel, SPELLCHECK!
    | Posted on 2009-08-27 00:00:00 | by dismal_s child | [ Reply to This ]
      Another good piece, great emotion! I really enjoyed your
    play one words.

    Love and Peace,
    Christie
    | Posted on 2009-06-23 00:00:00 | by lynn7 | [ Reply to This ]



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