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    dots Submission Name: My Souldots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/378
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Depressed
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    dotsMy Souldots
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    I am lost
    No not physically
    Not even mentally

    I am a lost soul
    Searching for its home

    Praying for a sign
    A light to lead my way

    For I am a lost and hurting soul
    Bleeding from the inside out

    Simply searching and even praying for a way home




    Submitted on 2009-06-23 22:26:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is heartfelt, lovely, and soulful in its sincerity and simplicity.

    We are at times all lost, and this touches the soul of each of us and reminds us of that feeling of being lost and alone, and searching for a star to guide us.

    Nice work!
    | Posted on 2009-06-24 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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