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    Author: Butter
    ASL Info:    17/Male/Hastings, MI
    Elite Ratio:    1.57 - 1/5/16
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
    Total Views: 450
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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       Parents think they know everything...blah blah blah...seems like just another teenage whine but i know their game. They just don't trust me they never have.


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    Parents try to do what's best
    They try to keep you happy
    They try to teach you lessons
    They just don't want you hurt

    I know why they do what they do

    But why do they think they know everything?
    Why must they try to ruin a friendship?
    I'm the one that's their friend, they should trust me!
    If they do what's best, why won't they listen to me?

    Just give me a damn break




    Submitted on 2009-06-23 22:31:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ha, parent can suck indeed.

    i guess it's best to get them frustrations out here. it's a little too.........idk. straightforward and lacking devices to really be poetry. well i guess that don't have to be true, but serves more as a vent than anything.

    still it's within some form and structure so thumbs up there.....

    perfectly normal thing to be goin through. so don't go thinking you've found the end of the world. columbus did when england realized he was a moron.
    | Posted on 2009-06-24 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]

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