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    dots Submission Name: Agape Moudots
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    Author: stormyskies
    ASL Info:    35 f melb Aust
    Elite Ratio:    4.26 - 979/832/230
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 51
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 803



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    dotsAgape Moudots
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    My love for you is
    bright and true,
    just as the star you wish upon.
    My heart is agape,
    soft and pure.
    Loving every part of you
    with each fibre of my being.
    Trusting you with my entirety.

    Knowing you inside and out,
    Secret glances,
    and knowing looks.
    Electrified by each touch, each kiss,
    Moment upon Moment
    where time is suspended.
    Hours disapear and
    days turn into nights almost instantly.

    Words do not come close
    and actions cannot speak loud enough.
    Being with you always,
    yet still craving you.

    Agape mou, my lover, my friend, my confidante, my soul mate, my one and only.
    I still cannot believe that youve come back to my life!




    Submitted on 2009-06-24 08:35:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      What beautiful words you have woven here. The meaning and sentiment that runs through them are stunning.

    I can tell that you wrote this straight from your heart.

    A wonderful write and a joy to read.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2009-06-30 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      Beautiful... its as if you have opened your heart to us all here on elite this is a great post... One day I hope to be where you are, to find my true love.

    Jackz
    | Posted on 2009-06-24 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]
      this is beautiful. i like how you didn't worry about the ryhme pattern and just seemed to let your thoughts flow no matter what. i am amazed at how mkuch it seems like you reached into the reader's soul and brought their thoughts out in the open. very nice piece!
    | Posted on 2009-06-24 00:00:00 | by gwenn sundala | [ Reply to This ]



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